please make sure these chapter references are accurate and there are hyperlinks to them
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:59PM on page 16
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add deputy director in case of absence
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:57PM on page 13
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reference missing
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:55PM on page 10
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please clarify - is this an edit comment?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:55PM on page 10
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modernize/clarify this picture please - looks like it's been photocopied too many times and has lost fidelity
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:53PM on page 8
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needs close parenthesis ")", hyperlink and has it been checked for fidelity/accuracy?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:53PM on page 8
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can you put 16 in table format?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:52PM on page 7
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define or show pictures of some of these that are lesser-known
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:52PM on page 7
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show example/picture or define
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:51PM on page 6
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This figure is not numbered. uses arrows - good. style very different from previous figures. recommend style and numbering consistency.
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:49PM on page 5
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add hyperlink to definition or define here
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:49PM on page 5
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add hyperlinks to these chapters
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:47PM on page 3
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Why have both figure 14-64-4.2 and 14-64-4.3? Recommend showing all examples A - F in one better/clearer picture.
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:45PM on page 3
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use arrows to better show distance between
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:45PM on page 3
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Unclear how this is 6' encroachment into minimum separation.
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:41PM on page 3
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This is not the best way to show a top view of 2 dwellings across from each other. Is the gray stripe in the middle a sidewalk, street?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:40PM on page 3
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To better clarify distance, use arrows on each end of straight line.
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 7:40PM on page 2
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(A) in parenthesis is supposed to apply to an "A" in a gray circle below. Recommend making both the same symbol. Example (A) in parenthesis in Table 14-64-4.1 = (A) in parenthesis in Figure 14-64-4.2
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