"reached its membership goal"
"gained" instead of "accumulated"
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:32PM on page 6
Suggested Revision
"its citizens" instead of "unique groups"
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:32PM on page 5
Suggested Revision
add year and add hyperlink to this resource/reference please
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:31PM on page 5
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add hyperlink to this resource/reference please
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:31PM on page 5
Suggested Revision
please add a link to this resource/reference
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:30PM on page 5
Suggested Revision
add hyperlink to the Dinosaur Park website
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:29PM on page 4
Question
when was this measured? what population/census year or reference?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:28PM on page 2
Question
When was this poll taken?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:27PM on page 2
Question
Are there over 50 parks within Ogden?
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:26PM on page 1
Comment
"Figure 1" is already used on the same page above.
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:26PM on page 1
Suggested Revision
Replace this picture with Ogden park or other "open lands" rather than urban street race.
Jeremy Shinoda Jul 15 2025 at 8:25PM on page 1
Suggested Revision
recommend adding a real Ogden photo and label with figure #
Lorenzo Jul 15 2025 at 10:45AM on page 18
Comment
Suggest adding another action here that seeks to identify trees that will survive not only in Ogden's current climate conditions, but also its future climate. Tree planting is a long-term action, so long-term vision is needed, including consideration of a climate that will be hotter than what Ogden now has.
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